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Saturday, January 22, 2011
New Contest Entry
I entered another writing contest on writing.com. I didn't win, but I got some great feedback from it. If you get a chance, check out my entry by clicking here - or check it out on my contest entry page. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
I liked this story I lot. Great twist at the end, didn't see it coming at all even when you mentioned the 'convenient' rope - was going to say was a bit too convenient for real life so I guess it worked on me for what that's worth :)
Only thing I noticed that didn't flow was the use of 'scanned' twice, might be better to find a different verb so soon after the first.
I liked this story I lot. Great twist at the end, didn't see it coming at all even when you mentioned the 'convenient' rope - was going to say was a bit too convenient for real life so I guess it worked on me for what that's worth :)
ReplyDeleteOnly thing I noticed that didn't flow was the use of 'scanned' twice, might be better to find a different verb so soon after the first.
Good job!